Ok so after looking at the previous three images I decided that I could do better. After blowing another NMOS and PMOS on the trigger I decided to put better switches in and grabbed some TO-220s. Hopefully the IRF740 will be able to handle a little smacking around better than the little TO-92s.
And I did do better! I went back to iso 400 for the sake of getting to F16 and increasing the clarity. I also extended the laser out another inch from the egg.... strange that this pellet appears to be tumbling.
Now I can go to sleep with a smile of accomplishment!