Fortifyiying New York

  • Gabe Umland 3y

    Some fantastic wrok on this man!
  • SpaceGypsy!!! 3y

    Good build. The story could be better, though.
  • Paul ♤ 3y

    SpaceGypsy!!! yeah the build was hard to understand so I added a story while uploading, but it was totally improvised.... I knew people would say something like that.
  • Paul ♤ 3y

    βroadside do wut ?
  • SpaceGypsy!!! 3y

    I just noticed, did you use collectable minifig stands for the roof? That's great.
  • Paul ♤ 3y

    SpaceGypsy!!! Yeah, thanks, but I think It's been done before but in a different way.
  • ∠Eric The Red 3y

    Nice work! I do have a couple tips for you.

    1. The building looks very unstable. Try to make buildings have at least 2 sides to them. The presentation and feel of the MOC would skyrocket. However, I'm not quite sure you'd be able to incorporate a 2 sided house into this kind of MOC....

    2. Next time try to take the picture of your MOC with all of it shown. I want to see all the edges of your build. Also, crop-out anything that you don't want in your picture (in this one you have some stuff to the right of the MOC) so that it looks more.... "professional".

    3. I recommend changing the mech that you have built a little bit. It looks a little crazy and unrealistic. This may help you. ;)

    All-in-all, sweet MOC and neat backstory! :D
  • Paul ♤ 3y

    ∠Eric The Red The building has two sides, it's just one is a little bit rainbow colored so I didn't show it on purpose :P

    OK,I'll try, I'll also make better proportions, It's what I do now but the "skeleton" of this is an old build from when I didn't.
    See for yourself, I do it nowadays...
    Imperial base on Tatooine. by Paul ♤


    Thanks, for the tip, that mech actually got some nice feedback on mocpages. I'd give you a link, but I can't access mocpages now. (duh ! why am I stuck here then :P) it's just that it's holding a gun accross it's chest so it makes us concentrate on the crappy part.

    thx, anyways ;) and I'll crop out next time.
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Taken on July 14, 2012
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