Sterile

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    CCSU goes Cubist. CCSU is a utilitarian campus but includes a few inspired designs. This however, is not one of them. This minimalist composition was made to convey static, nothingness. It is in fact a color photo. The figure is center positioned intentionally to strip the image of energy, and ultimately relies on the viewers eye to fill in the void.

    Ned Lyttelton, Dan Zen, D-Con, and 21 other people added this photo to their favorites.

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    1. Peli Cans 96 months ago | reply

      wonderful use of space and contrast
      from the (2for2) group

    2. D-Con 96 months ago | reply

      I love the perspective and comp. Excellent shot.

      2for2

    3. inklake 96 months ago | reply

      I love that it's a colour photo!

    4. Chaseism 96 months ago | reply

      very cool shot! I like it.

    5. 4BlueEyes Pete Williamson 96 months ago | reply

      Nice comp ..and it gives me a feel of isolation.

      ABC=pool

    6. Telenous 96 months ago | reply

      Smashing photography! Well done!

    7. Lawl 96 months ago | reply

      cool cool cool!

    8. jillie.bean [deleted] 96 months ago | reply

      I love this simplicity!

    9. oreses 96 months ago | reply

      This is a good one. I especially like the marks on the white marble floor, conveying a sense of repeated use and the presence of past "walkers".
      I don't think the decision to put the figure in the top middle portion was a good one though... for me it puts a border, a limit, and hurts the image flow.

      Detailed Score Me
      Creativitity = 4.5 Composition = 3.5
      Colours.... = 5 Capture....... = 4.5
      Rated Total = 17.5

    10. txiribiton 96 months ago | reply

      :D fantastic nothingness 123bw

    11. Paul Hurst 96 months ago | reply

      Great open pic with the subject positioned well. The creativity works well wit hthe patterned floor and the lack of colour also keeps things to a bare minimum.

      Good Shot

      Creativity - 4 Marks
      It takes guts to frame a shot like this.

      Composition - 4 Marks
      Maybe the person could be a touch lower in the frame but they are still well places and slightly off-centre too which I like.

      Colours - 3 Marks
      The use of colour is good.

      Capture - 4 Marks
      Again, the action is captured well and carries a sense of motion. It works well

      Marks 15/20
      Good picture

      Paul
      Score me

    12. Lee Nachtigal 96 months ago | reply

      Thanks -- I really appreciate the feedback. (just so you know -- the comment i left you was before I saw this. Everything I said is sincere!) I was surprised we used similar ideas to critique.

    13. adrizufe 96 months ago | reply

      all and nothing in the same pic. Like vey much the contrast between the girl and the floor, seems to be in b/w, but it's not, or yes?...noooo
      brilliant
      Detailed Score Me
      Creativitity = 5 Composition = 5
      Colours.... = 5 Capture....... = 5
      Rated Total = 20

    14. Ray Renati Photography 96 months ago | reply

      She reminds me of a lone ant scurrying about in the void.

    15. DELPHINES 96 months ago | reply

      interesting perspective .

    16. Jim Donnelly Photo 96 months ago | reply

      Cool picture. I really like the composition and the simplicity of it. It leave you wondering what is relaly going on in the picture. Good lighting and color as well.
      Detailed Score Me
      Creativitity = 4.5 Composition = 5
      Colours.... = 4 Capture....... = 5
      Rated Total = 18.5

    17. Daniel Kongos 95 months ago | reply

      Excellent composition. I think you could make it even more striking with some dodging and burning in photoshop.

    18. Central Connecticut State University 62 months ago | reply

      Hi, I'm an admin for a group called Scene@CCSU, and we'd love to have this added to the group!

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