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Balboa Park, San Diego, California.

  • Michael French 9y

    Nice angle, but seems to wander a bit at the top. It just doesn't seem to stay centered up there. Still I like the "thought" that it evokes.
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  • marioladeira 9y

    Hmmm what can I say... Good picture but "normal"... you should have explored more the subject.

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  • Plastic Jesus 9y

    I think it might be improved by the crop I suggested, and maybe if the focus was concentrated on the face?

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  • ipernity.com/home/nicoleb / No to censorship 9y

    I'm not sure about the suggested crop, but I would play with different crop possibilities a bit.
    The angle is good, but I wish for more clarity / crispness.
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  • TangoDream 9y

    I like the crop suggestion so that the central focus is on the face. It needs more contrast and maybe take a step back to get a little more of the figure into the shot. Nice concept, though.

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  • Marné 9y

    Thanks all for the constructive comments. I'm definitely a novice when it comes to photography, but I do want to learn to take better photos. Now I want to go back to the park and take some more using your suggestions!
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