Coffee Break

Photo Meditations: Lines & shapes for sure, but forms? I was hoping to get more of a feeling of the cup but it feels flatter than I'd like it to. I also wish the spoon and cup were angled back a bit more so that the handle of the spoon pulled your eye back instead of sideways. That would have also had the cup handle pointing into the frame. Next time...

 

I do like how the swirls in the coffee draw the eye in and around and the grain in the wood also subtley pulls you in.

  • Anne Touchette 3y

    This looks luscious...and I don't even drink coffee!!
  • luluandbob 3y

    Prior to reading your comment I was certainly drawn in. The curve of the lower part of the cup and the while swirl lines on top of the coffee certainly drew my eye in immediately. Then I read your comments and even though I wouldn't have thought about some of those suggestions, I agree. I learned from you today. Thanks!
  • Brenda Pederson 3y

    Thanks, all! (and for the faves)

    @luluandbob: we're all learning from each other! ;-)
  • Donna *deepenn* 3y

    I agree with luluandbob - it's a lovely photo and I also learnt from your thoughts about it.
  • Diana Micelli 3y

    Well done anyway!
  • Brenda Pederson 3y

    ;-)
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