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    A local kid playing on a big recycling garbage cans. Taken just outside my blocks of flats in Poznan.

    Please check another photo of her:

    www.flickr.com/photos/battousai/2570810983/

    Taken with Nikon FM2n, 50 mm f/1.4 lens on Ilford Pan 400 film. Developed and scanned by my friend, Przemek. As far as I know he used one of the FOMA developers.

    perszi, Quike Garcia, and 14 other people added this photo to their favorites.

    1. lmaffy59 [deleted] 71 months ago | reply



      viewed in the RAW Street Photography group

    2. *Sante 71 months ago | reply

      Nice ;-)



      Rated RAW by the RAW Street Photography group
      (comment & give RAW logo to 5 - 10 images for every 1 post)

    3. Nomad Vagabond Anirban 71 months ago | reply


      Creativitity = 5 Composition = 5
      Colours.... = 4 Capture....... = 5
      Rated Total = 19

    4. luciane.steiner 71 months ago | reply


      Creativitity = 5 Composition = 5
      Colours.... = 5 Capture....... = 5
      Rated Total = 20/20

      Very interesting composition, I like it!

    5. Old Picmon 71 months ago | reply

      The girl is nice, but the background is a major distraction. The edge of the building cuts off her head and her eyes get lost in the clutter. Since the sky is uninteresting, a shot from 2 steps to the left putting her against the blank sky would help seperate her from the background. Also shooting from a lower viewpoint would help emphasize the young-small girl-climbing high aspect of the shot. A much lower depth of field would also blur out the background and emphasize her.

      Class 3/5 (by the The Critique group)

    6. merlino72 71 months ago | reply


      Creativitity = 4 Composition = 4
      Colours.... = 3,5 Capture....... = 4
      Rated Total = 15,5

    7. persimmonous.jp 71 months ago | reply

      Charming!


      viewed in the RAW Street Photography group

    8. pipo peanut 71 months ago | reply


      Creativitity = 4 Composition = 5
      Colours.... = 3 Capture....... = 5
      Rated Total = 17

      I can feel very moment you captured it. :D

    9. iRon leSs 71 months ago | reply

      Piękny kadr, super pomysł!

    10. Felix Penzarella Jr. 71 months ago | reply

      fun shot full of life and feeling. though i would think about cropping in a bit tighter even thought hat would not change the issue of a central subject i dont think its that big a deal in this shot. I do like the shot though
      Class 2.5/5 (by the The Critique group)

    11. Blue Lime Photography 71 months ago | reply

      i agree that this photo could benefit from a tighter crop. I feel that the background is a bit distracting.

      Class 3/5 (by the The Critique group)

    12. Larry_Rothfeder 71 months ago | reply

      The girl is wonderful, and that's the best part of this picture. But the background is uninteresting. I personally don't think a tighter crop is in order. I would go with a wider shot. Too bad there weren't people on the street or some other secondary interest. I just don't think the girl, as vivacious and pretty as she is, is sufficiently interesting to make a good shot. And this picture is asking too much of her.

      Class 2/5 (by the The Critique group)

    13. dariozatuberoza [deleted] 70 months ago | reply

      fajne. gdzie zrobione?

    14. Pawel Maciejewski 70 months ago | reply

      Na os. Kopernika w Poznaniu

    15. tsienni 49 months ago | reply

      Hi, I'm an admin for a group called Humanistic, and we'd love to have this added to the group!

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