Thoughts of an Idea

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    1. anthemphotographyworks 110 months ago | reply

      I think this one is my favorite of the ones you have posted.

    2. aware riddle [deleted] 110 months ago | reply

      Very nice - reminds me of a paste up poster on a gritty wall in downtown anywhere. Does seem to be a bit too much empty space at left frame, especially with her looking out of frame to the opposite side, and that blast of ambient light from the back left weighs the shot to the left frame and I find my eye bouncing back and forth between that light and the model - but still, the lighting and exposure are excellent, as too is the processing. Not like I could do it, so not much room to heavily critique, but that's why we're here right? Good job, I enjoy your posts.

    3. American Peyote 109 months ago | reply

      anthemphotographyworks, thank you, it stands out more and more for me as well the I look at it.
      [https://www.flickr.com/photos/dalanharris/], I had some similar thoughts after I started working on it. The space of the the left side mixed with the concrete texture layer creates a type of space-strucutre combination which would work better if the left side were cropped a bit. I think cropping the left side a bit would give better flow to the image, and balance things out a bit better. A wind machine to create motion in the hair would have rocked as well. Thanks for your thoughts.

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