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    Poem: 8202538 - HUBCAP HALLELUIJAH

    Member: Frank James Ryan Jr.

    Comment: Wooooooooooosh! I take it you and someone else are not going to be in each others wills any time in the near or distant future, so it would seem!
    My friend, i have read many of your works before this recent battle of wits...You are inventive and innovative....your structure is clean, and (its just my opinion, you see & i could be wrong, as i have many a time & and will be many more times) but, i personally would like to see the pre-battle Firoze on-line....not to imply that this is non-creative parlance....It's just that, it might be time to move on to more productive work....Either way, you know i'll always read you....


    You are so naive
    you are honest
    you are so so frank
    But will my life become peaceful
    If on your advice and words I bank
    The day Hubcap came into my life
    My Titanic sank
    But I keep rising my head
    Out of waters ready to
    Fight Hubcap Allen James Shithead
    With my water tank
    This preposterously venomous
    Vituperative crank
    Whose limericks on my poetic ass
    Draws a blank
    If he sells them
    he wont even get a Rwandan Franc
    product of his horny mind that
    breeds in a common toilet septic tank
    his minscule manhood
    that Gangubai the Gonorrheal Whore
    in the Mumbai cages did yank
    the flucker owes her for the last fluck
    sordid memories on a choked river bank
    I respect you but to your kind advice I say No Thanks
    As Hubcap series of poems my mind wanks
    And the pedestrian poet in me AJS ‘s ass spanks

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