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This would be a marked-up, proofread version of the first page of Chapter 6 of that novel I'm working on. The mark-up was provided by my mother who read it and proofread it while at work, awhile ago.


In this scene, written in the first-person of Dan Williard, he describes his meeting with Student Council at school and broaches the annoying fact that he has to work with Tom Woodfern, the other main character, to the rest of the council. They all agree he's kind of odd, especially as he hangs out with the teachers, except for the character of Kristen, who sees the difference in the character and refrains from judging him.


I'm currently writing Chapter 16.

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Taken on May 3, 2010