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DSCF0118_B&W_crop

Should I get rid of this?
I kind of like it here.
DSCF0118_B&W_crop by Waxy Dan.
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Che-burashka  Pro User  says:

good use of negative space
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

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Waxy Dan  Pro User  says:

Thanks! First version is:

DSCF0118_B&W

... which has loooaaads more negative space :)
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

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asboluv  Pro User  says:

..superb shot..love it!!

; ))
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

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Mert Esmer says:

Score 8/10 (from the Score Me! group)

nice editing and use of black and white!
Posted 4 months ago. ( permalink )

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joshuammulligan says:

score 8/10 - very cool. Makes me wanna smoke.
Posted 4 months ago. ( permalink )

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subhajyoti  Pro User  says:

lovely
The World Through My Eyes
Posted 4 months ago. ( permalink )

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Felix Grufstedt  Pro User  says:

Score 7/10 (from the Score Me! group)
The first version is the better one according to me..
I like the negative space and that she seems to be alone. =)
Posted 4 months ago. ( permalink )

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Grey Hamster  Pro User  says:

Score 8/10 (from the Score Me! group)

and no to the notes. keep it in. It adds to the thirds rule
Posted 4 months ago. ( permalink )

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Waxy Dan  Pro User  says:

Thanks everyone.

@ Felix : I think I should print both and see which works... I actually agree with you but most others don't.
Posted 4 months ago. ( permalink )

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e-chan  Pro User  says:

Cool contrasts

The World Through My Eyes
Posted 4 months ago. ( permalink )

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/go/rikka says:

First Thought Really nice shot. And no, keep the little thing.
Posted 4 months ago. ( permalink )

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Antarehs  Pro User  says:

Score 8.5/10 From the Score Me! BW-group

Excellent image! I love the way the bright light draws the shapes and defines the volumes, the framing, the wisp of smoke, the negative space...

I like the newest version rather than the original: a more minimalist approach is more effective on this one, for my taste.
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Waxy Dan  Pro User  says:

Thanks guys. All good stuff.
Posted 4 months ago. ( permalink )

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K I M M O  Pro User  says:

Score 8/10 From the Score Me! BW-group

...gonna have a smoke..
Posted 4 months ago. ( permalink )

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Rubex  Pro User  says:

First Thought
instant fave
Posted 4 months ago. ( permalink )

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Waxy Dan  Pro User  says:

:)

Yeah, it does look like the most satisfying smoke ever.
Posted 4 months ago. ( permalink )

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