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this is my city

I like this bit for some reason. The color is a nice touch.
Something like this maybe?
this is my city by smoothdude.
I had one second to shoot this, when the train exited the underground and he looked up at the sun setting over Brooklyn
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my name is D (35mm) says:

nice one
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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JSDouble  Pro User  says:

magic NYC moment...one of those shots that reminds us of why we love our city. thanks for that!
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Cygnus~X1 - Visions by Sorenson  Pro User  says:

Excellent.

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Seen on your photo stream. (?)
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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Paint Monkey  Pro User  says:

timeless....nice one.
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r o d r i g o says:

Great as always!
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smoothdude  Pro User  says:

thanks everyone!
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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lanegreene  Pro User  says:

Makes you want to really remember how important the light is, to chase it and get ahead of it and make it work for you. Nice.
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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*adrisbow photography*  Pro User  says:

well done indeed
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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itspiv says:

with 2 seconds could you have framed it better?
undecided - i'll be back
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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guero:  Pro User  says:

good
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Husk and Sack  Pro User  says:

Fantastic!
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itspiv says:

i still think it could benefit from straightening

but put me down for a pre-save if this ever sticks in DMU
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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doublecappuccino  Pro User  says:

nice!
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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JKönig  Pro User  says:

i disagree abt the straightening, cos it looks to me like the train is turning into a curve, and he's leaning forward, which adds to the impact of the image.

one of your best, smoothsauce. ever.
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th.omas  Pro User  says:

agreed. sweet shot by a smooth dude.
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smoothdude  Pro User  says:

thanks everyone
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jakerome  Pro User  says:

-Voted "save" (by the Delete Me Uncensored Group)
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Husk and Sack  Pro User  says:

What I said.

-Voted "save2" (by the Delete Me Uncensored Group)
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bobby__emm  Pro User  says:

i agree with itspiv put it's still worth a save.

- save
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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PJ Taylor Photo  Pro User  says:

Great capture!
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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Rod Capturedsun  Pro User  says:

so i guess you didn't have time to balance the exposure then?

-Voted "delete" (by the Delete Me Uncensored Group)
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smoothdude  Pro User  says:

I guess if you don't want the exposure looking exactly like you wanted it, then no.
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'SeraphimC  Pro User  says:

Yay!

save
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Patrizia Burra  Pro User  says:

deluxe



-Voted "save5" (by the Delete Me Uncensored Group)
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Martino's doodles  Pro User  says:

hmm I am a bit buggered by the bar

delete
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ted.kozak  Pro User  says:

Not bad I should say.

-Voted "save6" (by the Delete Me Uncensored Group)
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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Ice Nine says:

In machinery!

*sweats*

Actually I think this is great (albeit looking at most of the pool, it's not too hard to see why).

save8 (apparently)
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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kayacan who?  Pro User  says:

really good one :)
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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daveish182  Pro User  says:

best in pool, have yer xmas...

save
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Lawrie M  Pro User  says:

It's been a while since I've voted on one of yours smooth

… but you really deserve it with this one.

-voted as "save10" (from the Delete Me Uncensored group)
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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Lawrie M  Pro User  says:

Congratulations, smoothy!

Feel free to move this over to The FOLIO.

Be sure to add it to the DM Gallery as well and choose one photo to remove.
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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lecanu mickael  Pro User  says:

Bonjour, je suis l'administrateur du groupe best the best, et nous aimerions beaucoup que vous ajoutiez ceci à notre groupe !
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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dowhatyoulove says:

i love this.
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mizz maze  Pro User  says:

Love it.
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☀Hunte-St.R●se™  Pro User  says:

great shot. love the intensity in his eyes
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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Daniel "Spud" Murphy says:

Fantastic shot..
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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45street | www.victorpuig.com  Pro User  says:

Excellent capture !. Brilliant picture !
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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>Shannon<  Pro User  says:

Great candid...
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mantruc  Pro User  says:

great capture, I love subway photography
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BLAKBEANS  Pro User  says:

Great capture of expression!
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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mt_klaric says:

I dont know what but there is something about this photo that communicates...just a feeling, cant say what...

saveme
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D-D-T says:

Without the description, it wouldn't work as well, still, I can't unread the description so

-Voted "saveme2" (by the Delete me! Group)
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Mat.  Pro User  says:

looks good small, large size is a bit hazy, great expression but doesnt quite do it for me

deleteme
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manaf says:

it's good, but not really good. i dislike the metal on the right, and the pole that bisects his head.
deleteme
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AHMED... says:

The poles distract!

-Voted "deleteme3" (by the Delete me! Group)
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vangruvie  Pro User  says:

it's as if a light sabre is about to cut him in half...deleteme4
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Grub Lubbor says:

The tilt, the halo and the person in the background. Otherwise it is very nice, but too many strikes...

dm5
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knoppy44  Pro User  says:

no reason to delete..

-voted as "saveme" (from the DeleteMe! group)
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E®go Martini™  Pro User  says:

Maybe the first candid I've seen in DM to my recollection and I like candids (10 000% more feeling and interestingness than the average perfectly lit portrait).
Hence;


-Voted "saveme4" (by the Delete me! Group)
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sofilou.ch [x]  Pro User  says:

good, but not good enough
deleteme
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Sir Demanding  Pro User  says:

right part of the photo ruins it all.

deleteme
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xdrei [十三] says:

you saved one too much.

deleteme
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smoothdude  Pro User  says:

xdrei that's the only dumb comment I've received (or don't get it)

that photo hit saveme10
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Jim Grady  Pro User  says:

The docking great metal bar and the slanting framing spoil it.



Deleteme10
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Jim Grady  Pro User  says:

xdrei is on a mission to post a link to that foggy station photo throughout the pool. Dunno why.
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jenmasonphotography says:

Outstanding... I love this - Great capture

Depth of field is fab!
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Satine Love  Pro User  says:

DeleteMe! group
impressive
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Jerome Jerome k  Pro User  says:

:)
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*Zo  Pro User  says:

I hate those deleteme groups.

This is gooood.
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danger.dave says:

just like the "we live here" shot. same sentiment. love it.
Posted 8 months ago. ( permalink )

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dannotti  Pro User  says:

I think the sign is distracting.
Delete
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kschimmel  Pro User  says:

nice catch

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heat_fan1  Pro User  says:

Too centered vertically, and the off-angle doesn't work.

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Team17pro  Pro User  says:

You f-ing nailed it man. Can you post a large? That glow on the pole above his head... his expression... the title... aces!

You need to give him a copy of this photo.

save 2
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garyreed  Pro User  says:

great image
save
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JillianPilch says:

I love street photography, real people and real emotions. This is just beautiful, a wonderful capture. I don't think the current crop does it justice, though. I'll suggest a crop in a note.

I really do love this shot. But as is, it's a delete.
Great job, though.
Delete3
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rolandvarriale  Pro User  says:

F Train? BQ Train autosave. nice shot smoothie

save++
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Ѕhims  Pro User  says:

Nice. Why crooked?

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smoothdude  Pro User  says:

I wouldn't really say its crooked shims.. does he look crooked to you (and he's the subject, not the bars of the train) I was shooting down below him shoot up at an angle.. hopefully that answers your question?

Also the bigger version is available in the description of the photo.
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Spoooony says:

Nice impromptu shot!

-Voted "save4" (by the Delete Me Uncensored Group)
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Colusite  Pro User  says:

kill that fare off the support rail and you've nailed it

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Thomas Griffiths  Pro User  says:

Wish the bar was not in the way. I still think the look on his face is priceless. save

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- Pier -  Pro User  says:

Yeah too bad the light on the metal tube... except for that I love the picture. Maybe a little more bokeh on the background... but those candid shot are always a lottery.

i say save
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jrfphotography  Pro User  says:

you need to crop this picture. although he look great here.
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Lightmash  Pro User  says:

Very nice smoothpoop!

save6
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sfmike22  Pro User  says:

darn for that bar in the way. Great light, great expression but that damn bar

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MB fp  Pro User  says:

I am with the guys that want the crop... but even that not sure enough.
delete
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scottcheloha  Pro User  says:

I think a crop would squash the perspective -- the photo is great with the room you've given it.

Voted- "save7"
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James Herman  Pro User  says:

Just crop a bit off the left...not too much...and I'd save it. I think the pole and the red sign add to the photo. (very reluctant) delete.
Posted 3 months ago. ( permalink )

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Scott Coulter  Pro User  says:

I agree with Jillian's crop suggestion. As it stands, I'm voting delete9.
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chrismar  Pro User  says:

The bar/pole in front of his face is bright and distracting.

-Voted "delete10" (by the Delete Me Uncensored Group)
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Louis XXV says:

Space on the left gives a context of him looking out to the distance.

Save
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chrismar  Pro User  says:

Hi, I'm an admin for a group called The Halfway House, and we'd love to have this added to the group!
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smoothdude  Pro User  says:

missed the lightbox by 23 seconds.. I think thats the closest I've ever lost a delete9/save9 contest (it was at save9 although people forgot to tag)

dang
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William H. Swagspeare says:

voted has ended but i like this a lot. that is all
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Greg Hayter  Pro User  says:

i like the pose, and the background. i do agree that the crop would help.. but this picture is still save worthy imho



-Voted "save8" (by the Delete Me Uncensored Group)
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MajorConfusion  Pro User  says:

Is it really that hard to straighten the photo?

delete
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ruanniemann  Pro User  says:

very nice shot, regardless of how long you had.
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thefallingtree  Pro User  says:

like this one... thoughtful stare...
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