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ESOL March Grey's Monument

Down with this sort of thing!
Careful now!
Gonna bust me a photographer
ESOL March Grey's Monument by Pig Sty Avenue.
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zenfrog  Pro User  says:

I'm a bit confused... It looks like it wants to be a documentary street photo, but why have the high saturation that blows out the red jacket and the reflective vest.

I also find the situation it's documenting confusing and I don't understand the story of what's going on.

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Sadie Shooter says:

this appears to be just a snapshot to me. I don't see much interesting about this photo at all.

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​eyebex  Pro User  says:

Very tangled mess of people. I think I see what you were after - most of them seem to be focusing their interest at the same thing. You didn't pull it off very well, though.

The red jacket hurts.

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♥ shhexycorin ♥  Pro User  says:

Ha, she's obviously RIVETTING

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Dreamtroll says:

I really love very tangled mess of people, I always find somthing to enjoy in picture of that kind.
Look at the police man, you can almost see hes thought, I belive he is wondering if you just break the law. The girls are lovely, and happy, and they are beautiful too!
Great job!
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Camster Factor  Pro User  says:

The vectors projected from all those eyelines (including the posters and even the headless manakins) turn this into a conceptual spirograph. The stares straight in to camera speak volumes. The speaker pins the image down.

Don't you just love it when serendipity comes a knocking.

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Justin D. says:

I might desaturate a little bit but the expressions in the crowd are great. Especially the police officer's. Think he's having fun?

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Photomotion [deleted] says:

boring frame

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Thomas Hawk  Pro User  says:

The central action of the speaker is not strong enough to carry the image though. I think this photo would have worked better, given all the unusual characters in it, without such a strong central figure.

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BigFrank  Pro User  says:

I disagree. I think with out the speaker this would have just been random.

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HE∀THCLIFF 'N C∀THY [deleted] says:

Camster beat us to it and said it best. Face-by-face adds up to an objective correlative of ... duhn duhn duhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnn... ennui.
pure pig sty gold


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cburtram  Pro User  says:

I find it rather interesting. Particularly the two central characters and as Camster pointed out all faces.

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Michael Smith  Pro User  says:

There's some good stuff here. The biblical pose of the girl in the high visibility jacket; the expressions of the policeman and the guy next to him.

But the right hand side of the frame is a boring mess and should be cropped out.

Reluctantly...

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sparty lea  Pro User  says:

Its magic, except for the speaker, she spoils it for me, sorry
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'SeraphimC  Pro User  says:

Great shot PSA.


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Maya Uzunova says:

I can't say where exactly is the problem here, but it's not a save.

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decembre71  Pro User  says:

It seems like there is not a clear focus to me... I know what you were aiming for, but I can't decide which girl I am supposed to be looking at.

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Redgum  Pro User  says:

Not quite..almost.

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Pig Sty Avenue  Pro User  says:

Thanks for taking the time, everyone.
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