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I suggest tighter crop and do a vignette.
every thought by crouchingcathiddendog.
"We take captive every thought to make it obedient to Christ." - 2 Corinthians 10:5

Can I have your opinions on this picture, please? I'm trying to get more portrait photography experience. I like this one, but I'd love to hear what you think about it. And why. Thanks :) 
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Rachel Pennington  Pro User  says:

It's fantastic. The lighting is wonderful. What a beauty!
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CaliforniaNat  Pro User  says:

I want to do the same and shoot more portrait. I like that things can happen spontaneously when one photographs children, but teens and adults are better at posing. This is nice because there are no harsh shadows on her face, just a soft one. You might want to try something that will reflect some light on her face. She's got such pretty eyes, they will surely shine with a little more light on them. She looks like a sweet young lady. She has a very inviting face. Will you use her more in the future? -NAT
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crouchingcathiddendog says:

Thank you Rachel and Nat! She's a good friend of mine, and hopefully she'll be appearing in more of my photos...

I really wish I would've had a reflector for her face... I know that would make a big difference. I need to buy one. Hopefully a small, portable one, maybe gold on one side and white on the other.
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reiscakes  Pro User  says:

Yea! I'm so glad you're being pulled to the portrait photography side ;)

She is a very beautiful girl and I love the pose! Here are my hopefully helpful tips ;)

1. Since the picture was taken in full sun her arms and her headband are really blown out here. The best time of day is morning and evening, or in the middle of the day underneath some sort of roof, awning, etc. I, for one, think that blow outs are sometimes ok (adds character) but I know other people really don't like them.

2. Try to get catchlights in both of her eyes. Right now I see a catchlight in her left eye (right side of photo). But in both eyes would really draw you in to her more.

3. I really love how you can see her legs behind her! Great perspective!

I'd love to see a close up of her. You could really make those beautiful freckles of hers stand out!

So good to see you on here again! I've been awful busy but have missed you :D

Blessings!
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crouchingcathiddendog says:

Thank you for the helpful hints, Jeni! I agree with what you're saying about the lighting.
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manfrommanila  Pro User  says:

lovely!
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hylaury {away}  Pro User  says:

i really like this, mary anne, and she is a very lovely girl!

i've been getting into portraits myself (just did my first senior portrait shoot 2 weeks ago), so hopefully these will be helpful...

i agree with what reiscakes said about the blown out areas. try to take the pics when (or where) the sun is not directly over your subject. the pics i did were in the early afternoon, and it was partly cloudy, which helped a lot. your camera should have a way to check your histogram and you can check immediately if you've got some blown out areas.

as for the reflector, you can get some nice one's on ebay that are gold on one side, silver on the other and fold up quite small for transport. i'm about to order one myself for just such things!!

the only other suggestion i have is to tone down the brightness of the grass. this can be done with editing software (if you have any). i'm just learning how to do such things, and i don't use photoshop (i use microsoft digital image), but i would be glad to email you some things i've learned if you like.

keep up the great work! it's so nice to have a friend who is willing to pose for you so you can get in some practice. the girl i did the senior pics for is the girl across the street who watches my kids sometimes, and she said she would let me practice on her some more when she gets home from the summer camp she went to. i can't wait!!
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Tennessee_Gator  Pro User  says:

I try to always shoot portraits in the shade, but if I can't I try to make the highlights work for me and shoot as backlit as possible to give a halo along hair edge.
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amanky  Pro User  says:

I love it... although, I'm admittedly more prone to the abnormal portraiture... a personal preference. This fits the bill so well, as it shows the subject enough, but still include lovely surroundings without complete distraction. Plus, I rather enjoy more seemingly candid shot, vs. everything looking very posed/poised. The looking away from the lens works well, for me!

this is a shot that can be enjoyed, not only by those who know & love the subject, but as a standalone piece of art... for anyone!

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awlyons  Pro User  says:

I like the low angle, Mary Anne. I agree that a reflector would help (which reminds me. I need to get one, too!). But the basic composition is very nice and the subject is lovely. Nice job.

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jpmarth  Pro User  says:

Some great stuff in this shot. The subject has a nice light smile that adds much warmth, I like she is not looking at the camera, and the way you framed it gives great DOF.
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crouchingcathiddendog says:

Thank you for your suggestions, everyone! I wish I could go back and re-do the shot, having thought it through better. But it's all good practice, and great to hear what you all think. Thanks!
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Dave - aka Emptybelly says:

Practice makes perfect... The comments about lighting are salient... DOF is great but I would crop just a bit wider than suggested and include the whole arm...
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JimReeves  Pro User  says:

All done and said a good shot.
And the smile says it all.
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jehwriter  Pro User  says:

Try using the flas to negate some of the shadows on her face. She is lovely and I hope we see more of her.
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cobalt123  Pro User  says:

I would go for a less bright time of day. There are too many highlights throughout the entire photo. But, the pose and composition is good, so go for this one just one more time.
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Ricardo Chaves  Pro User  says:

Beautiful, I love her eyes!
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prepster96  Pro User  says:

I have not portrait wisdom to give, only much appreciation for the beautiful subject and the colorful, relaxed feeling your composition lends to the photo.
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kira_jane says:

awesome verse!!!
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adonis hunter / ahptical  Pro User  says:

If I wasn't saved I would say it is 'absolutely perfect'...but u know what I mean! :)
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Chris[topher] Lin  Pro User  says:

It looks great to me. Lemme reach a bit, though...

Her face is in shadow. Fill light in post or a reflector (even something as simple as a white piece of cloth) would help towards that. Alternatively, maybe underexpose a stop or two to put her head into silhouette.

Also, maybe open up the aperture to make the depth of field shallower?

Really, though, this is very good.

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ggentry11  Pro User  says:

Nice job
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originalmulli (naomi)  Pro User  says:

A wonderful portrait. The varied light is great - I actually like her face being in shadow while the sun is so bright on her arms and the top of her head. Normally in this situation you would want to use a reflector like christopher says but her face is not dark, you've still got all the detail.
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psdevards [deleted] says:

an excellent visualisation of the important bible-verse;thank you so much;god bless your endevours.
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Rebekah Fuller  Pro User  says:

From a critical point of view...
I cant fault this photo anyway!
The composition is great, your model is great, the depth of feild is great.
ANd even better... the evrse is GREAT!
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his.images [deleted] says:

Hi, I'm an admin for a group called His creation, and we'd love to have this added to the group!
Beautiful!
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Rebekah Fuller  Pro User  says:

this is wonderful, a brilliant verse too.
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