Warming the bones

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    Funchal, Madeira, Portugal

    CM : To show the way the elderly people, at least in Portugal, behave. After a hard working life, with a small pension, and without hobbies created during their life time, they spend the time contemplating the worl going around.

    Superpepelu, Steve South Africa, and 30 other people added this photo to their favorites.

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    1. Monday Morning Photography 76 months ago | reply

      Technical: 6 - A stop or 2 overexposed which can be seen in the 2nd and 4th gentlemans heads. Natural light can be tricky and you were very close to benig right on. Just a little post processing would take care of it.
      Composition: 6 - I agree a crop is in order. Very promising framing though.
      Eye Appeal: 8 - The photo looks very natural and unstaged. Very appealing to the viewer. Could have been taken by a seasoned photojournalist. Way to go :)
      Commercial Viability: 5 - The rating is not meant to be negative but incates this is more of a snapshot than a commercial or artistic photo

      Very promising first submission :)

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    2. Phil Langer 76 months ago | reply

      Technical: 7 - a tiny bit overexposed
      Composition: 8 - very nice but maybe a bit closer to the subject
      Eye Appeal: 8 - very charming. i like that the 4 men have different expressions
      Commercial Viability: 7- could be in a gallery. maybe black and white would work too

    3. fyimo 76 months ago | reply

      Technical:7
      The image has nice color but it has a few lighting problems with a few hot spots (over exposed) where detail is lost.
      Composition: 6
      I think a crop is needed to draw focus to the scene and move it out of a snapshot look and feel.
      Eye Appeal: 8
      The image of the 4 men is really natural and relaxed and is very charming.
      Commercial Viability: 4
      I think the image could be stronger with a crop and some adjustments with post processing using levels. I think the image has little commercial applications as it stands now.

      Grade 6.25/10 as seen in The Portfolio: Pro Invitation

    4. elishaowdom [deleted] 75 months ago | reply

      Beauty is in the *EYE* of the Beholder
      Please add your Beautiful Photo to:
      Beauty is in the *Eye* of the Beholder!

    5. taurussun 75 months ago | reply

      This photo says so much. They probably sit like that almost every day.
      I saw this in Beauty is in the *Eye* of the Beholder!

    6. koduckgirl 74 months ago | reply


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    7. Bart Goossens Photography 71 months ago | reply

      Thanks for letting us use this picture on www.taalblad.be!

    8. DR_ASHVIN 65 months ago | reply

      Hi, I'm an admin for a group called SILVER CITIZENS AROUND THE WORLD, and we'd love to have your photo added to the group.

    9. aaron_language 45 months ago | reply

      This is a great shot. You photograph the young and the old with the same great eye! Thanks again for letting us use another of your photos at our site. As I think I emailed you before, the photo is up at the top page of our Portuguese related translation site at portuguese-translation.aaronlanguage.com/index.html. I wanted to thank you publicly though and let you know that we have changed our site a little.
      You are still credited with your name underneath, but your name is now linked to our credits page at portuguese-translation.aaronlanguage.com/portuguese_credi.... Your name is credited on the page and links to your profile at flickr. Thanks again!

    10. davies.thom 44 months ago | reply

      Very good. Their body language is very interesting here. You have done well to document a part of elderly society in Portugal. Great street work.
      I enjoyed the opportunity to view your photo at Explore My Photostream

    11. Mike804 42 months ago | reply

      Just to say I've added your photo to my What's Your Favourite Meditation Book page on my website.

      Works a treat!

      Thanks for the great photo!

      Mike

    12. pcerisolafernandez 36 months ago | reply

      Social-Documentary-Photography_logo1
      Thank you VERY MUCH for your superb documentary picture.
      Seen in: Social Documentary Photography
      (Post 1 Award 5)

    13. Bub8 36 months ago | reply

      Hi, I'm an admin for a group called Granddaddies, Grandfathers, Poppas, etc., and we'd love to have this added to the group!

    14. Washee 34 months ago | reply

      ~ true, it's a very realistic capture.

    15. Sociology At Work 33 months ago | reply

      Thank you for sharing your wonderful image Pedro! We've used it on our blog promoting sustainable pensions for retirees in the EU. We've attributed the image to you of course. FYI. See Sociology at Work: Sociology at Work: sociologyatwork.org/2010092597/blog/eupensions.html

    16. ⎈ Maria 13 months ago | reply

      Congratulations. You have just won: People #25224 .
      Please add this photo to the pool: 10+ Colour

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