JesseBarker: thanks. I have been reading
'Photoshop LAB Color' by Dan Margulis
(recommended) and trying out a few things.
Pretty much fishing in the dark, but that's
the way to learn isn't it? ;)
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Superchou: its super to have you and
sebastian saying such nice things about a
photo of mine. you were always the sensitive
happy face of the deleteme. sigh. gone are
the days...
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super: i have become old and weak in my old
age. all i want to do is sit in the warming
sun of spring. no bitter barbs from these
super critical groups for me anymore!
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I thought that I already commented on this
photo, but I guess that I was just
"thinking" it! ;0)
This image enchants me! So easily could
this look like a simple snapshot...but for me
it does not. I think that the soft, baroque
colors of this photo is quite nice.
Compositionally speaking, which is my
preferred language ;0), I love how you have
included the vertical elements such as the
flower on the table and the door jamb. For
me, exclusion of these elements would be
detrimental to the composition since the
directional forces help lead the eye around
the composition.
The only thing that I keep returning to is
the door jamb. (This is so minimal AND
personal preference) I wish there was less of
an angle and would be straightened a bit.
After all was said, I score this image with
a 9/10 in the CommentMe group.
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Dr. Pat, this is largely a spectacular shot,
with some real high points. I love the pose
you've caught, and the clarity of the way
you've constructed the image - the rakish set
of the tripod, the eager pose of the hands,
and especially (this is my favorite part) the
little dash of blue light from the LCD screen
on the camera, playing over the boy's face.
Then there's the weird plasticky texture of
the individual elements. This is what you
were aiming for, presumably, and you've
pulled it off well, but it grates on me. The
effect seems lodged somewhere between a Pixar
Studios rendering and the unfortunate
animation style of that terrible Polar Express movie, which generated Tom Hanks' face on
most of the characters. Both awkwardly
stylize the human face and hands, which are a
little beyond the reach of current computer
art. It's an oversetting of the noise
reduction software, yes?
In any case, the weirdness of this aspect
of the image frankly creeps me out a bit. It
makes a quandary for scoring, because I think
the image succeeds on its own terms, which is
most important. At the same time those terms
aren't ones I like very much.
Ultimately, I think the hyperreal
consistency of the image is stronger than my Polar Express association. This is magazine quality work,
although I would expect to see it
illustrating a piece, say, on the rise of
mania in children, or somesuch.
After all was said, I score this image with a8/10 in the CommentMe group.
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Corporal Tunnel: many thanks for your helpful
comments. I certainly see what mean about the
skin. I have to revist the original at some
point and see whether I can generate a more
pleasing effect. the photo was taken at 1600
ISO and caused a fair amount of noise in the
image. I may have removed too much noise that
subsequently led to this effect (or perhaps
not). Not sure the picture with noise would
have looked better though. Even at 1600 ISO
the speed was pretty slow and five year olds
tend to move a little so its possible that
there is also a subtle blur softening
everything. I also played around a bit with
the color balance (the original was way too
red) and this might have generated its own
problems. As it stands I like the image, but
it may (or not) be possible to find a better
version if I play around.
I was interested in what people thought
about the composition in general. I wanted to
give a sense of his smallness by giving a
sense of space above (and couldn't work out
how to crop anything below the flower
comfortably), but I am not sure this worked
or not.
Thanks again to you and MaiKoh for very
helpful comments, that's what I really like
about this group.
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Très jolie photo du point de vue du sujet -
les couleurs chaudes sont agréables. Deux
détails toutefois sont gênants: la
perspective de la porte et l'appareil photo
apparaissant sur la table
Score CommentMe 9/10
Claude
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claude: thank you for your comments. my
french is pretty bad, but I was curious about
your comments. You didn't like the door (like
MaiKoh). do you have any suggestions on how I
could have improved things? is it the
straightness of the door that you didn't like
or some other aspect?
Also you said you didn't like the camera on
the table. I guess I did because its the
boy's mothers old russian SLR and i thought
there was a nice resonance there with the new
mini-digital that her son was playing with.
Do you think i should have removed the camera
or just put it in a better spot?
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claude : merci de vos commentaires. mon
Français est assez mauvais,
mais j'étais curieux au sujet de vos
commentaires. Vous n'avez pas
aimé la porte (comme MaiKoh). avez-vous des
suggestions sur la façon
dont je pourrais avoir amélioré des choses
? est-ce la rectitude de
la porte que vous n'avez pas aimée ou d'un
autre aspect ?
En outre vous avez dit que vous n'avez pas
aimé l'appareil-photo sur
la table. Je devine je parce que son Russe
SLR et moi de la mère du
garçon la vieille a pensé qu'il y avait une
résonance gentille là
avec le nouveau mini-digital avec lequel
son fils jouait. Me
pensez-vous devriez-vous avoir retiré
l'appareil-photo ou juste le
mettre dans une meilleure tache ?
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A great shot. The old expression "A
picture is worth a thousand words"
really applies here. Great facial expression
as well. The only thing I don't like is the
door in the background. The emptiness takes
something away from this shot, but overall,
well done.
After all was said, I score this image with
a 8/10 in the CommentMe group.
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Dottore Pat, this is a sweet and wistful
image, there is a future growth suggested
with scale, the camera on the table is
symbolic of the fuure as is the child playing
with the moment. Trapped in the adult world,
they escape by getting down to their level
and scale...the plant also represents growth
and fruition, too Freudian to be believed but
almost a statement about how you became a
photographer....8/10 Comments group
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Well I think I agree with most off all about
the door, if you had been a little more on
the left, it could have been avoided...Then
it could be more pure!
However, the expression of the boy is
gorgeous! Like the light and the colors wich
are just perfect!
I like this funny look of a photographer on
photography, on an other photographer, the
new generation, borned with digital...
For the camera on the table, or you could
have put it out, or show it more, so that I
can feel the difference between the old and
the new generation...
After all was said, I score this image with
a 8/10 in the CommentMe group.
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That expression is incredible. It really
makes the picture. He just looks so
interested and just mesmerized by that
camera. I also love the position of his hand.
Beautiful.
The lighting in this photo is lovely. The
warm tones are just perfect for the mood of
this shot.
I do agree about the door jamb, though, but
other than that this is a great image.
After all was said, I score this image with
a 9/10 in the CommentMe group.
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thank you all in commentme for such helpful
and thoughtful comments. its really a
pleasure to re-read them all now in one
sitting.
OK. I agree about the door. I should have
fixed this in PP, and didn't notice until it
was pointed out to me.
I may have overdone the noise reduction
giving a slightly fake look to the skin.
However, this may also have been done when I
was applying colour correction in LAB. The
original lighting was much redder (too red in
my opinion) and sort of complex coming both
from candlelight on his right and a
fluorescent lighting on his left. In the end
I think it worked out, but it probably gave a
slightly odd hue to things.
many thanks again.
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Actually, I think you could go both ways on
the door as well. For me...I like the
continuity of things...no bend in the table,
no bend in the door jamb, you know that
nit-picky annoying part of the perfectionist.
But there is the more
"irrational/spontaneous" part of me
that says that the curve on the door jamb
emphasizes the point of perspective of the
boy.
So there you go! More info! ;oP
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it's great to get kids involved. in my
school there's barely anyone who shares the
same passion as i do for photography. not
even the art teachers.=(
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Hi, I'm an admin for a group called Photographers and her cameras, and we'd love to have your photo added to
the group.
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Hey, shouldn't he be working in the coal
mines by now? Creativity must be repressed
at an early age, before he turns into
something disreputable, like an artist.
Good stuff. I hope you agree that this pic
would fit nicely as part of the new group
"Pictures of People taking
Pictures." We need some kid shots. Mind
posting it in the group pool? www.flickr.com/groups/picturepeople/
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