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"MAN RULES" message series promo real head

"MAN RULES" message series promo real head by pastortrav.
"MAN RULES" is a 3 week series we're working on for the fall. We'll be dealing with topics of Biblical Masculinity. This image is a rough idea to be used for a mailer, slides, etc... Thoughts? 

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estherproject  Pro User  says:

Maybe a different image? This one bothers me 'cause the head is too big, but it doesn't really say "man." Maybe a men's restroom sign instead?

The tagline is funny, but you're not going to get women with it. I realize they're not your target audience, but you don't want to alienate them for three weeks either. It's possible to do a series on biblical masculinity that speaks to women too. We have to deal with men every day, after all.
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DanielleSuzanne  Pro User  says:

i like the idea of a restroom sign. i think that would be stronger than what you're doing in these two comps.
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BeckyMartin says:

This isn't as compelling as I think you could make it. Obviously, from your tag line, you're OK with humor, so explore some other creative visuals. The restroom sign might be one...big muscular arms folded across a man's chest...the title written on a white bar napkin...the title on a weathered metal sign affixed to a chain-link fence (like outside an urban basketball court)... Think about environments where men spend their time and find a way to insert your title.
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