UnTouchable Series

Graphic for a new series called UnTouchable. It is about topics we don't want to deal with.

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Brendyn. [deleted] says:

I like it. It's simple.

I'd bring out "un" and the tagline a bit more.
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

@muntz says:

Losing the apostrophe in "we'd". The background isn't doing anything for me either. Good start though.
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

Agree with Studio Muntz about the background. If you spell out we'd to we would, the two lines would be more balanced too. Justify the second line to match the length of the first.
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

BeckyMartin says:

I, too, vote for upping the weight on "UN" and the tag line. I'm not sure if having the tag line touch the headline was an intentional play on "touchable," but I'd increase the leading for readability sake.
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

Nathan Allworth says:

Might want to use "We Would" as opposed to "We'd". It doesn't read well with that thin face.

Just a thought.
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

paul_snyder says:

I like the idea of flipping the weight of un and touchable. put the emphasis on what we normally don't talk about.
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

adamagregory says:

Agree with all of the above

-- Make "Un" the heavier weighted font
-- Spell out "we'd" to we would to balance the subtitle w/the title
-- Lose the current background, You could use a sort of texured gray BG that has the shadow/burn effect on the edges
-- Also play with the kerning of the subtitle as it seems to me the letters are almost smashed together
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

thePLOWblog says:

Thanks guy and gals. I will try some designs with those suggestions.
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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