I hope the color isn't too bright on your screens. It is supposed to
have some greyish tone left to it.
I didn't change anything else, only overall curves. -- That's just soft shadows on the left.
Someone asked what I did to motivate her: It was a little job so I could give her money for once, then she was suppposed to scream a sentence with many "a"s so I could fire often and it looked real.