The Mayor of Worldwide Breast Cancer's photostream

Here's the first draft of the Croatian poster. Please offer your suggestions for improvements in the comments below. Make sure to compare it to the English version so you can verify it is correct. It is the next poster when you click "older" above. To view at a larger size, click on "actions" > "view all sizes" thanks!

Link to English poster: www.flickr.com/photos/lemonland/5166044167/in/photostream/

This poster says "A Dozen Signs of Breast Cancer" but the translated one should say "What does breast cancer look like?" My goal is to translate this into as many languages as possible. Click on the poster to see at full-size to understand the symptoms that are being shown. Please leave a comment below for your suggested translation. Keep in mind that the tone of voice is one friend to another. I will redesign the poster and upload it to the set again for the final tweaks. Thanks!

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Here is a template you can copy and paste below to get you started:

LANGUAGE:

hardening =
indentation =
skin erosion =
redness or heat =
new fluid =
dimpling =
bump =
growing vein =
nipple retraction =
asymmetry =
'orange peel' skin =
inside lump = (it means a lump you can feel, but cannot see)

WHAT BREAST CANCER LOOKS LIKE = (in all CAPS)

If you find something new that stays around, show your doctor. =

Did this poster speak to you? Learn more of what you can do about breast cancer screening through refreshing and informative design like this at worldwidebreastcancer.com =

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(if you don't have a flickr account, you can email me your translation to mayor *(at)* lemonland.org address.)

Please compare this poster to the English one after this poster. Is the German translation close to the English version? Is there anything you think could be said better? Keep in mind it needs to be as brief as possible in describing the symptoms.

Please leave your suggestions for improvement below in the comments so others can see your ideas and build on them. You can also click on the image by the word and type in a new word (use Actions > add a note, to do this). Here is an example:

"Bump" should really be [insert German word here] because of [insert reason here].