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John Taylor MSU says:

Looks like something you'd find inside Willy Wonka's Chocolate Factory. I'll post a real comment once I hear your pitch!
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

46137 says:

Very personal idea - yet speaks to many. Shots are well composed. The wine glass is fantastic. I like where this is going! Can't wait to see the end.
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

charondajapan says:

This is Fresh... your idea is totally new to me.
Curves - I think its coming together Matt!!!! I cant wait to see it!
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

amydee00 says:

I really think that the glass emptying is a great way to show the level of "love" or commitment. It's a very powerful message, and well thought out.
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

Sahngyoon Seo says:

What a ROMANTIC curve.

First wine part is so awesome. I am so jealous. Next year I will send you my ROMATIC video. God bless you and your future.
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

Idea: There's great potential here. I think if you look deep inside yourself, you'll find the idea that's really fresh.

Curve: it definitely has a forward movement to it. The ending is critical to the curve and to the idea you're expressing
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

mjgrunch says:

I like your transitions, great FRESH idea. I love it. Great way to get your point across! Can't wait to see what you do with the ending.
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

fatina108 says:

I really like the idea.. I can't wait to see the ending.. the symbolism of the emptying cup is really great. Good luck
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

mathdrama says:

Nice opening shot. The theme of the wine is nice. The build with glass needs to be matched with the emotion. How will you refill your glass? Will you? Congratulations!
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

John Taylor MSU says:

Freshness: we get AA commercials at every single commercial break on Armed Forces Network. Ask any DoDDS teacher. 9 times out of 10 it's really awful--laughingly awful. And like Stephanie said, if you make this have a bouncy happy ending, I think you're going to tarnish it a little bit. Who is this geared towards? Is this a warning or a sympathetic helping hand? If it's a warning, I say keep ending abysmal and a debbie downer. Actually I think that's how your ending should be no matter what.

Your voiceover is excellent. I like your voice!

And the wine class getting less and less=excellente.
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

paulainhk says:

Love can certainly be choice sometimes.
Love your idea and that you have chosen to go dramatic; way to go outside your comfort zone.
love the effect of the wine glass and wil's suggestion is fantastic.
a thought.....fade out half way on the vows and then fade back in at the end of the video
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

Scott Christian says:

Vows.

The first wine glass is dramatic in its building effect. The closeup has power. I like the theme of the wine glass.

End how you like. It's a good story.
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

davidabutwo says:

I like the idea of the cup empyting as the story progresses. I don't know if it's necessary to zoom in on it the first scene (when you're working late), leave it in the shot but make people wonder what's going on. If you were to zoom in on the second time you're saying you have other things to do, then everyone'll get it with an aha moment.
As endings go, just a suggestion, what if you turned off the computer, the TV and put down the mag and the cup filled (somehow..).
Your movie is a great idea.
(Have you been reading the Five Languages of Love?)
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

awarren311 says:

Matt I like your idea it makes people think. Very fresh. It will be interesting to see how the rest goes! That will tell more about the ending of your dramatic curve.
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

Stephanie Richardson says:

The wine glass is absolute perfection - one drop spills over... and you can see the abandon with which you jump into the situation.

I agree with the comments about your voice - you sound too happy or joking... you need smarmy and insincere, especially as things go downhill (and to make people question how sincere the initial vows were).

Great dramatic curve - answering what happens would lessen it, I think. I can see what the others are saying, too, though.
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

Duester says:

I love that first shot - the sun, flowers and slow pan back is great.

the voice is so KIND!! a harsher voice would be more believable , but, maybe that'd be unrealistic ?

an actual game would be good...;-)

good start, it came off well.
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

celeste.rush says:

Wow! love the angles, colors, wine glass effect. Your voice and the vows are great. I agree with the classmate about changing your tone with each compounding incident. Good luck with the ending but leaving us hanging and wondering isn't such a bad idea. Who is your audience?
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

jkaiser_73 says:

Its coming together brotha. I do think that, perhaps, I agree with Chris on the narration voice. If you're gonna hit hard, you may have to trick that section up a bit with you're angry voice .... just a thought.
Posted 17 months ago. ( permalink )

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