RC - My problem with this picture is the
relationship of subject and surroundings.
You've included the surroundings as if to say
that they are important, however I can't
really get any information from it. If the
image is about her, which I belive it is you
shouldn't be afraid to get even closer. The
Crop suggested above would still show her
relationship to the rest of the children but
draw your attention more to her face and
hopefully make this a more dynamic picture.
However the best way to crop this of course
would be in camera and not in photoshop as
the DOF could be controlled and the angle
could have been improved. As of now it just
feels, well kind of boring.
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X-travalueMeal#2
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RC - My problem with this picture is the relationship of subject and surroundings. You've included the surroundings as if to say that they are important, however I can't really get any information from it. If the image is about her, which I belive it is you shouldn't be afraid to get even closer. The Crop suggested above would still show her relationship to the rest of the children but draw your attention more to her face and hopefully make this a more dynamic picture. However the best way to crop this of course would be in camera and not in photoshop as the DOF could be controlled and the angle could have been improved. As of now it just feels, well kind of boring.
Posted 51 months ago. ( permalink )