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MarriageSeminar_Insert-1 by jennrizzocollins.
this is already done...just want some feedback and offering inspiration. this is for a marriage seminar we are having at our church. the title is "changing the destiny of your marriage" so we went with a dreamy, cloudy look for it. 

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@muntz  Pro User  says:

Very nice, but that type at the top is difficult to read. I would have changed it to white, then tightened up the gradient so it showed better.
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iwearbrown  Pro User  says:

love this direction... the title copy is hard to read like *muntz said ... everything kind of has the same weight to my eye.... could the titling be stronger? It seems a little off that the title and sub aren't center justified but the rest of the page is...

love the imagery though, but I think a better idea on the titling would really make this pop!
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7ulio.com says:

I love this design. I agree with the 2 chumps above me, the type at the top is difficult to read.
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malaya182 says:

I think it's pretty. Maybe it's just my temporary monitor (which I think is older than I am), but it doesn't seem to have a lot of color. That, coupled with the ornate capital on the "C," almost made me think goth-y at first. Maybe not what you're going for.
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malaya182 says:

Follow-up to my comment...I got a new monitor and now I see the blue. :) :) How frustrating is it to design stuff with a monitor that's older than you? Praise God for peace that comes from Him!!
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