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a form of women

a form of women by jamelah.
Eh... I don't know. Sometimes I get carried away... this may or may not be one of those times. Anyway, poem:

I have come far enough
from where I was not before
to have seen the things
looking in at me from through the open door

and have walked tonight
by myself
to see the moonlight
and see it as trees

and shapes more fearful
because I feared
what I did not know
but have wanted to know.

My face is my own, I thought.
But you have seen it
turn into a thousand years.
I watched you cry.

I could not touch you.
I wanted very much to
touch you
but could not.

If it is dark
when this is given to you,
have care for its content
when the moon shines.

My face is my own.
My hands are my own.
My mouth is my own
but I am not.

Moon, moon,
when you leave me alone
all the darkness is
an utter blackness,

a pit of fear,
a stench,
hands unreasonable
never to touch.

But I love you.
Do you love me.
What to say
when you see me.

-- "A Form of Women", Robert Creeley

I like Robert Creeley a lot. I even interviewed him once

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Linda's Many Muses  Pro User  says:

I studied him for an entire semester once.

This is so very beautiful, Jamelah.

You've not gone too far. Not at all.
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Crystl  Pro User  says:

I agree with Linda. This is wonderful.
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caryn74  Pro User  says:

nicely done and I don't think I've read that one before, so a multiple bonus for me!
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G r e n  Pro User  says:

whoa. this is superb!
More! More!
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Beppie K  Pro User  says:

Wow, very well matched.
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.Marcin says:

the moon in the middle is like an eye looking for an object to focus on. It's almost there... (Lit.Ref.)
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It'sGreg  Pro User  says:

Let yourself get carried away more often. You do it well.
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Linus Gelber  Pro User  says:

Jams, I'm late to the game here, but yes - this is beautiful. I might reconsider the framing, but that's just me; and as far as getting carried away, well. When I get carried away, the results aren't contemplation material. This is a fave, yo.

And Creeley on top. Yum.
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Lynn Morag  Pro User  says:

Just super!
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peggy.  Pro User  says:

I like what you've done with this image and the words you chose for it.
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jamelah  Pro User  says:

Thanks for the comments, everyone! (Linda, I knew I'd get around to some sort of montage eventually.) This looks a little bit darker here on Flickr than it did when I initially worked on it, and I'm still playing with it some, though I doubt I'll repost. The poem definitely inspired me....

Thanks again!
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yaznotjaz  Pro User  says:

Get carried away more often, Jamelah. The results are lovely. =) Also, I really enjoyed reading the Robert Creeley interview. Thanks for sharing (and also for conducting the interview, I s'pose, otherwise we all would have missed out).
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localproduce [deleted] says:

Moving. And nice montage. I like the melancholy and resignation of this piece, the implied duty. This is striking work on many levels. Thanks. I am moved.
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zissshh says:

u aree going great
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Bill Ectric says:

How do you come up with so many intriguing pictures???
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