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Train Car Ride by Elfworld.
- "What did you like about the train ride," I asked him.

- "I liked to watch the world pass by outside our sleeping cabin," he replied.

- "Anything else," I prodded.

- "I liked to see the world pass by through the the windows of the cafeteria car too" he said.

He paused for a moment.

- "And I liked that you gave me candy as we saw the sun set."

I love him so much. 

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sosij  Pro User  says:

Awww bless, what a sweet recount of lovely parenting! he looks wise and thoughtful. LOVE his eyelashes in the background!
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crazycrazy (sporadic at best)  Pro User  says:

The key was the sunset. Often they only think of themselves as it is their nature at that age, but to throw watching the sunset with you in the mix, the love just overflows! Beautiful!
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craig philip szlatoszlavek. says:

Well done a great capture/candid, a penny for his thoughts.....b&w maniacs
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cyclops35  Pro User  says:

Great grab, in an ideal world more light/contrast, well done.

From the Rate and Comment:Black and White Group, you are given a 7.5/10 ranking.
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SwapnaChatterjee  Pro User  says:

From the Rate and Comment:Black and White Group, you are given a 6/10 ranking.
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Staale N  Pro User  says:

Flott drømmende uttrykk... kanskje litt mørkt? Flott portrett.

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Eva B:E  Pro User  says:

Du er så flnk til å fortelle! Husker ennå historien om hunden. Men når du forteller alt dette vil jeg også se hva som passerer forbi vinduet... skulle ønske vinduet var med eller at du klippet vekk kanten av gardina. Tenksomt uttrykk, fint formidlet. ( Bildekritikk! gruppen)
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Stavelin  Pro User  says:

Kjempefint bilde av en kjempefin gutt. Generelt litt mørkt men litt mer lys kun i ansiktet kunne også ha dradd det opp litt.

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cordova614 says:

I love the story. Very sweet expression, but not much contrast.
From the Rate and Comment:Black and White Group, you are given a 7/10 ranking.
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JenWithBlueEyes says:

7/10. Its a great shot, but a little dark. Good picture though
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Elfworld  Pro User  says:

Thanks for the votes and great and insightful comments. I really appreciate them. I agree that it's maybe a whee bit too dark, but I still like it a lot.
nattowl: Tusen takk. Jeg journalisterer jo en del, så det er jo greit å høre at man har ordene i sin munn..ehh...sine fingre. :)

SWAPNA: The group charter asks that one gives a reason for the grading. Have you got one?
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ƒяαиcєscα яσsє  Pro User  says:

i really like this, and the caption is adorable
i like how you can see his eyelashes on the other side of his face, thats a really nice touch

i enjoy the black and white effect but i think its a little too dark
goodmeaningfulcomments
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Aware of Now says:

I can see that there is a lot of good detail in this photo, despite its needing more brightness overall. I like the composition. Also, the highlights in his eyes do a good job of bringing the viewer to look at them more carefully. Excellent portrait.

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Elfworld  Pro User  says:

@francesca/@aware of now: Thank you for your excellent points and constructive feedback.
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