The Apology

    I like you, but not
    Enough to take you to the
    Hospital. Sorry.

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    1. krush! (75 months ago | reply)

      Hehe, very amusing.

    2. jonpalmer (75 months ago | reply)

      That was me you dumped into the wharf. Well I'm back, you bastard.

    3. [Soren] (75 months ago | reply)

      I want this on a greeting card.

    4. dbol39 (75 months ago | reply)

      Uh, Jon? I don't quite know how to tell you this, but I wrote/built it for my girlfriend.

      But metaphorically, maybe it was you.

    5. Bohman (75 months ago | reply)

      A great illustration of the haiku. Well done.

    6. dbol39 (74 months ago | reply)

      By the way, it's been pointed out to me that the original, spur-of-the-moment haiku that I formed actually went like this:

      I liked you, but not
      Enough to take you to the
      Hospital. Sorry.

      That very small change doesn't leave any room for the person to come back.

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      Empress of Blandings added this photo to their favorites. (17 months ago)

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