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Jackon's Truck

Jackon's Truck by Brian Hathcock.
My great-uncle was rich by way of 100 acres of land beside a lake. His father gave him both the land and his name, Jackson. He was my grandmother's brother, kind and humble. His fortune never ruined his character, though it easily could have with other men. He was a millionaire for certain by the time he reached fifty. Just before his eighty-sixth birthday he died of heart failure.

There was nothing in his will for anyone. I got nothing, my father got nothing. His brothers and sons and daughters got nothing. The thing was, he had given away all his riches while he still breathed. I think he turned most of it into silver dollars while I was a boy; he always put one in my hand when he would see me in his fields or at church.

One time, just before his heart failed, he came around with his old truck. He had driven that truck for twenty-five years, longer than I'd been alive. It was rusty and the horn didn't work. I took my seat and he slowly wheeled us to town. We went to the Deluxe Grill and had corn dogs. We talked about Ronald Reagan and baseball. 

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spunmunkey  Pro User  says:

Great framing and composition!

love the narrative...

Great pic!

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janet.powell  Pro User  says:

Beautiful composition. I feel as though I am transported back a couple of generations through this photo, it has a real timeless quality. Nice work with alignment of the two vehicles' side mirrors, an intersection there, and also with the clarity of reflection. And regardless of the truth to the tale, it is wonderful...
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Angelrays  Pro User  says:

Very cool, image, Brian -- it reminds me of an old movie. Is the story true? True or not, it's well written!
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Tamara Paetkau [deleted] says:

Oh this one's awesome B...love how you've framed the other car through the car's window. "We talked about Ronald Reagan and baseball"...chokes me up it's so beautiful and simple...reminds me of my Opa. Your great-uncle sounds like a remarkable man. Fortune could so easily have ruined his character, we see that happen to people every day. I'm glad it didn't ruin his.

(Edited to add: Just read Angelray's comment...I feel stupid now if this isn't true!)
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suzie.Q  Pro User  says:

Cool pic, great story...
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Brian Hathcock  Pro User  says:

Thanks, guys. Tamara, please don't feel stupid, but the story is made up. It's a great compliment that you would take such an interest with your thoughts and emotions!
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emimi  Pro User  says:

What a moving story, you must have loved him very much. I can only hope to be remembered by my grandchildren so fondly. Excellent photo to illustrate the story.
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dlangshaw says:

I am confused but I like the story and the photo!
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blaumond  Pro User  says:

a step back in time!! great idea and the pics takes us with you ;-))
great shot...and very well captured in sepia!!

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tygerlyl says:

Hey, this is cool! I like how you have captured all the rounded rectangles in this photo.


This gets a trophy!
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Girl Between says:

This has been a great week for you. What a great idea these time pieces have been. I love this.
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Seeing Is  Pro User  says:

Such powerful images and stories... beautifully captured and portrayed!
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Viorica G  Pro User  says:

WOOOOOOOOW!!!!!! GREAT SHOT MY FRIEND !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hugs , KISSES AND FAVE OF COURSE :))))))))))
HAVE A LOVELY DAY
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WAPPY AL  Pro User  says:

Wonderful story which really adds to your image. Your perspective is excellent and i love the framing , i would be proud to have this one large on the wall.
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Harriet Picturebug  Pro User  says:

Terrific story, and a perfect photo to go with it. Excellent work!!
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(Gary)  Pro User  says:

Wonderful photograph, an a marvelous story.
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neloqua  Pro User  says:

A lifetime original story:the photo is perfect to illustrated it!
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The Milkman's Daughter [deleted] says:

Oh what a story and fantastic photo to go with it. Thank you.
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basilly  Pro User  says:

hahaha...part of being a good journalist/life writer is making people believe...you got me..was totally drawn in...great shot.
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Mista Yuck  Pro User  says:

Great shot, good depth, good choice for black and white. The framing of the car using the truck gives this a certain cinematic quality, and the caption is like an excerpt from a novel, but the photo can pass as part of a film based on said novel.
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