Brand - Organic Growth

    This is the first draft of a Brand for our Upcoming Message Series focusing on the early church in Acts and its growth.

    Any suggestions, advice, or comments that you might have would be greatly appreciated.

    Thanks!

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    2. BeckyMartin (49 months ago | reply)

      I like this except for the flourish coming off the O in Organic. I don't think it's necessary. If you want to keep it, try to integrate it more into the O (color and intersecting lines).

      I'm also not sure what to think of the perfectly parallel lines for the tag line box. You have both straight (rays) and irregular (ground) lines in the rest of the piece. Maybe it's the perfect lines and the serif text in the tag line box that makes that element seem out of place.

      Is there metaphorical significance to the water coming from both the cloud and the watering can?

    3. Russ Hutto (49 months ago | reply)

      I was gonna ask the same thing about the cloud and the watering can, because even as grassroots as a watering can is...it's not "natural" or "organic"...

    4. bemky (49 months ago | reply)

      Hum... great points. I agree with the water can point.

      Becky... I was hoping to use the curls/flourish off of the O to define the brand with a smaller more logo type medium if necessary, but you make a great point. I will rework.

      Thanks!

    5. the charlie (49 months ago | reply)

      It's peachy how it is.
      Keep everything.

    6. jeagraphic (49 months ago | reply)

      it feels organic
      very nice work

    7. RussellBrown (49 months ago | reply)

      Love it, see the tweaking points, well execution is well done!

    8. jonathanbrink (49 months ago | reply)

      I agree with Becky. The swirls coming out of the O are a different type of swirls than the trees. They don't have the same feel as the rest of the artwork.

    9. Dead Air (48 months ago | reply)

      Hi, I'm an admin for a group called Weekly Theme Photography, and we'd love to have this added to the group!

      This Week's Theme is Growth!

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