Parent connection Dinner

    This was a flyer handed out to the parents telling them about the parent dinner coming up.

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    1. enadsleinad (48 months ago | reply)

      greg and robin at young's house? that's just how I read it. top left is pretty crowded and i think in general the layout and font choice could be improved. maybe you're only using 2 or 3 fonts but your use of small caps, type with lowercase letters, bold, and numerous font sizes really make this piece weak IMO. I would scrap the power cable. it doesn't go with the dinnerware. Play up the personal connection element that you describe in your body of text. that paragraph is probably too long as well. would a map be better than directions?

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