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angel falls

angel falls by aletteke.


There was a great flapping of wings,
enough to cause the water to spill over the banks,
or so it was said,
this was the reason to call it Angel Falls.

I saw no angels
sitting on the bank of the river
heard no wings
flapping above my head.

Clearly the water still rushed, over the side
into a small seemingly bottomless pool
for some reason it bade me
and inexplicably I jumped.

There was a great flapping of wings
and I found myself wet and tired
on the bank of the river
beside Angel Falls.

I knew better than to look into the abyss;
how strange,
that temptation and salvation,
exist but a heartbeat apart. 

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gycingeniero  Pro User  says:

I Think this is Art ! AWARD
Posted 30 months ago. ( permalink )

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allen_edwards  Pro User  says:

Interesting!

A little Confusing to look at. I know that sounds weird,
but if it was a little more balanced it would be easier to enjoy

I do like it though
Posted 30 months ago. ( permalink )

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Juergen Kuehn says:

Thank you for joining!

"JK-PhotoGraphics & Poems"
Posted 28 months ago. ( permalink )

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