Is God Green mailer

    This is front and back of a direct mail piece for a series that starts Sunday.

    I should have uploaded this while it was still in process so I could have benefited from your feedback while there was time. I still welcome your impressions and critiques. I'll learn something from you that I can implement next time!

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    1. jeagraphic (48 months ago | reply)

      hey i likey
      i would have suggested to maybe make the font for "is god green" a little weightier and push it down and to the corner so it some of it bleeds off the edges... would give it a cut out effect
      right now it floats
      like the simple plant thingy
      maybe to connect it to the front, have the same thing in a white silhouette
      these are just brainstroming ideas
      you got a good solid piece sis,
      very fresh and inviting
      hope the services go well

    2. BeckyMartin (48 months ago | reply)

      Thanks for the feedback, Tito. The client's request was "simple, simple, simple," so I wasn't sure the Bittbox plant would even pass their test. I hadn't considered bleeding the text off the edge.

      I, too, hope this connects with people and the series goes well. That's one of the hard parts about having clients all across the country. This one is 400 miles away, so I'll have to make due with the feedback they give on the branding's ability to connect with their community.

    3. graceward (48 months ago | reply)

      I love the simpleness of the front! I do wonder if you want to use the "Journey blue" for an accent on the back like the star on the map and maybe the worship times??

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