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Lauren

A window-lit portrait of my sister.

I've been working on taking better portraits, and this is one of my best from recently, and I'd love any criticism/help you can offer!

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  1. Fred [feukiou] [deleted] (82 months ago | reply)

    You don't like her, huh?

    -voted as "deleteme" (from the Delete me! group)

  2. Sebastian-Lewis (82 months ago | reply)

    nice enough, but not really that special.

    -voted as "deleteme2" (from the Delete me! group)

  3. Chris & Lara Pawluk (82 months ago | reply)

    Can't fault it really. Problem with portraits is they are only special to certain people.

    -voted as "saveme" (from the Delete me! group)

  4. Piper Dunolly (82 months ago | reply)

    Slightly less of an exposure ( about a stop)
    -voted as "deleteme3" (from deleteme! group)

  5. foxymama8600 (82 months ago | reply)

    pretty womwn but not a save me

    Deleteme4

  6. mclgreenville / memorymotel (82 months ago | reply)

    light is too harsh on her neck and lower face.

    -voted as "deleteme5" (from the Delete me! group)

  7. tomgardner (82 months ago | reply)

    Nice portrait, but agree that light is too bright in places, esp on her neck- pulls the eye away from the face a bit.

    -voted as "deleteme6" (from the Delete me! group)

  8. Robin Thom (82 months ago | reply)

    The lighting makes her jaw-line/head-tilt seem a little stiff.

    Otherwise nice shot.

    -voted as "deleteme7" (from the Delete me! group)

  9. Mr. Mark (82 months ago | reply)

    it takes a lot to get me to save a portrait shot, and unfortunately this doesn't have enough. I love the light, especially that line along the left side of her jaw. Pretty face too.
    still...

    -voted as "deleteme8"

  10. jasohill (82 months ago | reply)

    Girl is awesome. Picture is not.

    -voted as "deleteme" (from Deleteme! group)

  11. thetourist (82 months ago | reply)

    nice girl

    -voted as "deleteme10" (from the Delete me! group)

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