What if you took the logo mark thing that is
in the bottom right corner of the letterhead,
and turn it into a watermark? It just feels
a little out of place as it is IMO.
Hey Jeremy -- Very slick as always. For some
reason though, I'm not feelin' the colors on
the bottom. I guess they feel a bit
disconnected with the church name and the
black/red vibe at the top (maybe due to the
large white space in between them). The top
and bottom just seem like separate designs to
me.
It also feels much more suburban than city.
Is that intentional? I almost wonder if the
cityscape from the logo could be used as an
element that communicates your location a bit
more. Are you trying to move away from that
logo? It doesn't seem very prominent here.
Love the typesetting on the business card.
Any chance you could add another 3-4 job
titles? What don't you do there?
@jeremy: Hey I looked, but couldn't find
anything else with those colors on your
stuff. I really like colors personally, and
I'm wonder how you come up with them? Trial
and error? Or any sort of process?
Fantastic job! I like the fact that it
conveys (at least to me) both modernity and
peacefulness.
I think that very few people appreciate the
extent to which the kind of work you are
doing influences whether seekers will cross
the threshold. It's a great ministry and
it's obvious that you are giving all of
yourself to it.
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* cameron * (41 months ago | reply)
Sweet! Love how clean and modern this looks.
What if you took the logo mark thing that is in the bottom right corner of the letterhead, and turn it into a watermark? It just feels a little out of place as it is IMO.
Nice job man.
(Jim LePage) (41 months ago | reply)
Hey Jeremy -- Very slick as always. For some reason though, I'm not feelin' the colors on the bottom. I guess they feel a bit disconnected with the church name and the black/red vibe at the top (maybe due to the large white space in between them). The top and bottom just seem like separate designs to me.
It also feels much more suburban than city. Is that intentional? I almost wonder if the cityscape from the logo could be used as an element that communicates your location a bit more. Are you trying to move away from that logo? It doesn't seem very prominent here.
Love the typesetting on the business card.
Any chance you could add another 3-4 job titles? What don't you do there?
Just my 2 cents.
The Vineyard Church - Urbana (41 months ago | reply)
@jeremy: Hey I looked, but couldn't find anything else with those colors on your stuff. I really like colors personally, and I'm wonder how you come up with them? Trial and error? Or any sort of process?
jeremyscheller (41 months ago | reply)
The colors are actually pulled from our new website (not up yet, coming very soon!).
Everything we're doing will transition towards this look and feel.
Thanks for the feedback...
I'll make a few adjustments.
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DavidUMC (40 months ago | reply)
Jeremy:
Fantastic job! I like the fact that it conveys (at least to me) both modernity and peacefulness.
I think that very few people appreciate the extent to which the kind of work you are doing influences whether seekers will cross the threshold. It's a great ministry and it's obvious that you are giving all of yourself to it.
Peace out