mouse_screen
2nd in a series for upcoming fall kickoff sermons. This would be for a screen. I plan on using one of these designs and doing a special program and mailer. Pastor likes them, but I am really still in the design phase. I'd like any feedback before I apply design to other materials.
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worshiphim24_7 (46 months ago | reply)
I think the concepts on all these our pretty sweet, although this one isn't consistent b/c the others have the "pest" where this just has a piece of cheese... a dead rodent too much?
RaygunDesign (46 months ago | reply)
Well, the wasp and the fly are pretty close to actual size. If i put the mouse at the same scale, it would be too big for the overall design, but if I shrunk him, I thought it would look funny.
iwearbrown (46 months ago | reply)
I don't think you would have a problem... the cheese isn't really true to size either... I think it would work out well.... and follow suit to your other designs...
btw the cheese just makes me hungry.... when is lunch again?
Aubrey the Intern (46 months ago | reply)
The cheese doesn't fit in visually. It's clean lines and peppy color clashes with the grungy-dirty look of the design. It also has no shadow so it's almost as if it's floating. I'd cut it completely.
Here's an idea: put in a mouse tail. That way there are no dead rodents or disproportional mice issues.
diana_11_6 (46 months ago | reply)
maybe the cheese should go on the trap? or, haha, perhaps a piece with mouse prints and crumbs trailing away....I'm half serious in case you can't tell.
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