Nocturn

    Acostado a tu lado, oigo los trenes.
    Cruzan mi frente sus fugaces luces
    rasgando el horror tibio de esta noche.
    La pausa de silencio me deja una luz roja,
    una nota sobre este pentagrama
    de cables y de vías oscuras y brillantes.
    Acostado a tu lado,
    oigo cómo se alejan con el ruido más triste.
    Quizá me he equivocado no subiendo a uno de ellos.
    Quizá el último acierto
    sea -abrazado a ti-
    dejar pasar los trenes en la noche.

    (Joan Margarit)

    Comments and faves

    1. Mari ...., gateta, elenadesantelmo, José María (Txema), and 23 other people added this photo to their favorites.

    2. jlmatch2 (52 months ago | reply)

      Qué buena combinación de texto e imagen...

    3. gateta (52 months ago | reply)

      La trobo brutal !!!! .................... m'enganxa aquesta foto..... molt maca composició!

    4. elenadesantelmo (52 months ago | reply)

      el sonido de un tren en el silencio de la noche me traspasa el alma, como el poema de Margarit..
      Qué imagen preciosa!

    5. oboulko (52 months ago | reply)

      Fantastica !

    6. Ane Zabala....:-) [deleted] (52 months ago | reply)

      me encanta

    7. Steeena (52 months ago | reply)

      Creative Photo's
      You are a very good and creative Artist and I really like your Creative Photo
      This photo was seen in:

      Creative Photo

    8. Eddi van W. (52 months ago | reply)

      Hallo, ich bin der Administrator der Gruppe Global Artist's(Post 1 - Award 3), und wir freuen uns, Ihr Foto unserer Gruppe hinzuzufügen.

    9. Tim Noonan (52 months ago | reply)

      Your Artwork Is A True Vision Of Global Art!
      globalthumb2
      The Global Artist's Group! (Post 1 Award 3)
      Your World Wide Community Of Artist's Coming Together.

    10. loló2008 (52 months ago | reply)

      Impresionante.

      Lo que más me gusta es la aparición del ojo, por detrás del tren.

      ¡Gracias! por compartirla con nosotros.

      Besos
      Loló 2008

    11. kamala_ (51 months ago | reply)


      I saw this in the Zero+ Faves group and Faved it.

    12. adamwood.co.nz (51 months ago | reply)

      nice effect


      I saw this in the Zero+ Faves group and Faved it.

    13. kablino (51 months ago | reply)


      I saw this in the Zero+ Faves group and Faved it.

    14. TJ Scott (51 months ago | reply)


      Your Photo Wins a Heart
      From Heart Awards Group
      Very moody and cool.

    15. enlavidabohemia. (51 months ago | reply)

      me has dejado sin palabras, es genial.


      Your Photo Wins a Heart
      From Heart Awards Group

    16. Martyn Starkey (51 months ago | reply)

      Now, that's what you call a ‘Picture Perfect’.Please post this photo in:

      Welcome!!!

      Hello
      www.flickr.com/groups/picture-perfect7/

      Please tag your photos with PicturePerfect

      Have fun…

    17. mensaka (51 months ago | reply)

      Hola, soy el administrador de un grupo llamado MENAGERIE gothic statements* (post 1-give 1 seen in) y nos encantaría agregar tu foto al grupo.

    18. josemari y su ojo [deleted] (50 months ago | reply)

      impresionant.

    19. sidz11 (49 months ago | reply)

      Very interesting!

    20. ivvi.photography-away for a while- [deleted] (49 months ago | reply)

      just great!
      have a nice day!

      I agree, this is definitively an artwork!!!and my comment deserve a fave!!

      "Fave moi France" group (post 1 - Fave and Comment 3)

    21. @欽 (49 months ago | reply)

      I agree, this is definitively an artwork!!!and my comment deserve a fave!!

      "Fave moi France" group (post 1 - Fave and Comment 3)

    22. zalo_astur (49 months ago | reply)

      muy buena foto en general, todo perfecto

    23. amilde86 (49 months ago | reply)

      muy buena composición

    24. *and (42 months ago | reply)

      WINNER
      Your fantastic black and white picture is my winner!
      Please add this photo to
      flickr.com/groups/bwphotoaward/

    25. piriskoskis [deleted] (42 months ago | reply)

      reflexe, doble exposició?... igualment, molt guapa ¡¡¡

      SEEN IN *BLACKartWHITE*

    26. serakatie (41 months ago | reply)

      I don't speak Spanish, so I used Google translate to try and understand the poem above. Can someone improve the translation?

      I like the photograph and the poem.

      ................................

      Lying next to you, I hear the trains.
      I crossed his face lights fugitive
      ripping horror warm tonight.
      The pause of silence leaves me a red light,
      a note on the staff
      cable channels and dark and bright.
      Lying next to you,
      I hear how it away with noise sadder.
      Maybe I was wrong not to rise to one of them.
      Perhaps the ultimate success
      as-you-hugged
      let the trains at night.

      (Joan Margarit)

    27. Paolo.L. (37 months ago | reply)

      Excellent idea!

    28. SomebodyStopMe (32 months ago | reply)

      Thank You For Sharing
      Your Wonderful Image
      B&W2
      Which Has Been Seen In
      ”Best Black & White”
      Post 1, Comment 1.

    29. lukmisz (28 months ago | reply)

      marvellous and creative ;)

    30. ps70 ...,,.,., (28 months ago | reply)

      what an artistic work! Just fantastic!!

    31. CMC Cardoso (19 months ago | reply)

      YOU ARE INVITED!!

      Your photo is a superb shot so you have been invited to join us and post your photo at Simply Your Best Photo B

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