fail_graphic3small

    3rd revision...
    tweaked the perspective a little more, thanks to VIP for the help.
    Also based of his suggestion, added footprints coming off the paint....
    still open for other feedback, suggestions, etc...

    Comments and faves

    1. - Didi (53 months ago | reply)

      legal

    2. worshiphim24_7 (53 months ago | reply)

      legal?

    3. A.B. Dada (53 months ago | reply)

      I love it. Perspective is perfect! Footprints work either way, it was just an idea, but I think it adds a little more detail, although I'd consider making them a BIT more transparent so they're more effect and less obvious.

      I think the cross might be TOO dark, because the light effect was great -- it was easy to miss the first time which makes it more attractive.

      Overall I think it is perfect!

    4. holycowcreative (53 months ago | reply)

      I agree that the cross is a bit dark now...I'd also work on the paint drips. They wouldn't be as uniform or straight.

      Nice improvement.

    5. jeagraphic (53 months ago | reply)

      mashallah!

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    7. tonygray216 (53 months ago | reply)

      I really like this image. The perspective looks much better. It is more believable now. The only thing that kinda bugs me is the color of "Failure" seems kinda pink and not the same sepia tone as the rest of the image. That could be my monitor. Also I liked the cross more when it was less obvious. Anyway...Great Job!

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      ZekeSmith added this photo to his favorites. (53 months ago)

    9. worshiphim24_7 (53 months ago | reply)

      thanks again for the feedback everyone... I went ahead and threw a revised graphic in my photostream....

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      OnPoint85 added this photo to his favorites. (46 months ago)

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