2008 Summer Events Postcard

    4 x 6 in glossy postcard with blank back. Multiple uses: mainly promotion & reminder.

    Target audience:parents of preschool and elementary kids.

    What do you think?

    Comments and faves

    1. new.perspectives (51 months ago | reply)

      seems a little dry for preschool/elementary related events.

    2. TheRev2005 (51 months ago | reply)

      I would have to agree ... kind of needs something more "kid friendly." The black background automatically suggests a more "mature" audience.

    3. pwonflickr (51 months ago | reply)

      not getting this at all, especially for kids

    4. PatrickFore (51 months ago | reply)

      Take a look at the lab, and see what others have done.

      Use more color, more "white space" and use faces.

      Using people in your designs bumps up the interesting factor by about 10.

      Good luck -- keep learning, keep designing.

    5. Jennie Rae Morgan (51 months ago | reply)

      Thank you for all your input. I really appreciate it. I'm just a "wanna be" designer, so I'm still learning. I'll keep it mind for future publications. This one went to print as is due to deadlines...

      Even though it won't affect this publication, any other feedback?

    6. visionmarketingdesign (50 months ago | reply)

      as a mother of four this would not make me get more info for my kids---don't give up, concept is decent 3 pics/3 items---just keep in mind that when it comes to kids event you have a dual audience: the parents and the kids---the kids sometimes have just as much influence as the parents, if you don't believe me go to check out counter and see how many parents are asking their kids if they want candy pacifers! :o)
      don't stop designing

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