truth behind the myths v.3

    took the suggestions of others and flattened out the 3d text and surrounded my title with the various "myths" that will be presented during this summer series. any other suggestions? trying to wrap this freelance project up this weekend. thanks.

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    1. rockysmile216 (25 months ago | reply)

      Paul...this is looking great. Great change of direction and great way to implement it. You should feel super proud of it man.

    2. * cameron * (25 months ago | reply)

      Awesome! Way to take that feedback and implement it so strongly. My only other suggestion would be to put the fading gradient on the Myths text instead of the Truth text. I think it makes more sense to have the the Truth feel strong and the Myths feel it's fading away. Great stuff Paul!!!

    3. holycowcreative (25 months ago | reply)

      I think Cameron's right on w the gradient. Great looking piece.

      I'd probably work with the bottom text a bit to make it feel less tacked on.

    4. @muntz (25 months ago | reply)

      I think cameron's right. that's not quite what I had in mind when I suggested the gradient.

    5. BeckyMartin (25 months ago | reply)

      Cameron's gradient suggestion is right on. Nice work, Paul! This is a great example of why, with the right attitude, groups like these can be so meaningful!

    6. Joe Cavazos (25 months ago | reply)

      I really liked how seeing this piece morph from your first comp to this. Great work Paul!

    7. paul_snyder (25 months ago | reply)

      so i just heard from the client and found out that this isn't going to be a worship guide cover...just a web banner and image for projection. so my entire orientation is off. crappers! gotta re-lay it out today.

    8. David Choate (25 months ago | reply)

      Bam! This is great! Well done...much better without the 3D type.

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