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Fishing at Blenhiem

Fishing at Blenhiem by wit.
From Pike by Ted Hughes

A pond I fished, fifty yards across,
Whose lilies and muscular tench
Had outlasted every visible stone
Of the monastery that planted them-

Stilled legendary depth:
It was as deep as England. It held
Pike too immense to stir, so immense and old
That past nightfall I dared not cast

But silently cast and fished
With the hair frozen on my head
For what might move, for what eye might move.
The still splashes on the dark pond,

Owls hushing the floating woods
Frail on my ear against the dream
Darkness beneath night's darkness had freed,
That rose slowly toward me, watching. 

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skin says:

The discussion on this picture for the Weekly pool can be found here.
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5-points  Pro User  says:

Lovely image and fitting poem
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Lynn Morag  Pro User  says:

Wonderful words by Hughes to accompany the lovely image!
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PAИ  Pro User  says:

Compositionally visual issues. As the black big spot (fisherman) too close to base, and also disturbing grey on top. Not that without that it would be a save, though

deleteme
Posted 25 months ago. ( permalink )

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PAИ  Pro User  says:

I've been having troubles with my internet connection (I wrote this comment 3 times and lost it). Finally all are voted. Of course at this time you don't have to tell me, we're kind of old : )
Posted 25 months ago. ( permalink )

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wit  Pro User  says:

No probs PAN
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sofilou.ch [x]  Pro User  says:

I agree that there are some minor flaws, but the general impression is OK for me

saveme
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José Brito  Pro User  says:

I must say I like it.

-Voted "saveme2" (by the Delete me! Group)
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dr ama  Pro User  says:

I liked the older version more

dm2
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Sergi Bernal  Pro User  says:

bad textures of the water, the water is burn.

dm3
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gdiazdeleon  Pro User  says:

Minor flaws sank on that white hell...

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Posted 25 months ago. ( permalink )

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Tom Q  Pro User  says:

I like it, but not enough to save - the composition/framing just isn't quite working for me.

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"SIR: Poseyal : KNIGHT of the DESPOSYNI  Pro User  says:

nice mood and feeling saveme3
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Robin Thom  Pro User  says:

Ah...so many lines come to mind.

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Posted 25 months ago. ( permalink )

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thombo2 says:

I think this is unique,interesting, and creates a great mood - people will hate on it because of all the white, but I think that adds to the allure of the shot.

saveme4
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Rod the Rabid Rodent  Pro User  says:

Blah composition, needs some spicing up. Try dipping it in this:

THAI FISH SAUCE WITH HOT CHILES
[priknampla-THAILAND, LAOS]

1/2 cup bird chiles, stems removed
1 cup Thai fish sauce

Place the chiles in a food processor and pulse to finely chop (stop
before they are a mush). Or, wearing rubber gloves to protect your
hands, use a cleaver or sharp knife to mince the chiles on a
cutting board.

Transfer the minced chiles (with their seeds) to a glass or plastic
container and add the fish sauce. Cover and store in the refrigerator.
The sauce will keep indefinitely, losing chile heat over time; top it up
with extra chiles or fish sauce when it runs low. Serve in small
individual condiment bowls.

Makes just over 1 cup sauce

(From Hot Sour Salty Sweet by Jeffrey Alford and Naomi Duquid)

dm7
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Jobbys says:

Like it but the frame proportions aren't working for me.

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xtremepeaks  Pro User  says:

nice one
saveme5
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Space][rucker  Pro User  says:

Not a bad photo, but an easy one. I think the waves at the top of the image interfere with what could have been a nice fade into nothingness.

dm9
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pizzo  Pro User  says:

This boat is still floating?

deleteme10
Posted 25 months ago. ( permalink )

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Jim Skea  Pro User  says:

Thank you for your DeleteMe submission. We're sorry you didn't get the 10 savemes you need for The Safe, but your 10 deletemes make you eligible for today's consolation prize - you can send your shot to the U Got Me thread where you can include the score, highlight the comment that made you laugh most (if there were any) and make fun of all those philistines that didn't understand your art.
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bbbang71  Pro User  says:

Great Shot!!!
Bravo!!
Posted 11 months ago. ( permalink )

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alessio grazi  Pro User  says:

this is Art !

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Claudio Marcon  Pro User  says:

Excellent...

WR Award
WR Award
Water Reflections
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jill browne  Pro User  says:

Thank you for sharing this beautiful picture. I love the silhouette effect here. I have used the picture on You, Ink blog, with a credit and a link.

Many thanks, wit,

jill
Posted 4 months ago. ( permalink )

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TylerGriffin  Pro User  says:

Thanks for the CC license! I just used your photo on one of my blog posts: hicks-wright.net/blog/career-break/
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