Punctuation.
Punctuation
They met on a rainy evening, outside a club in which they never
entered, on November the 23rd.
She told him a few hours later that their new born story, however long
it would last, would end with a kiss.
He smiled and kissed her, to prove her wrong.
Three years later, here they are, in the middle of a dreamy summer,
facing each other.
He can tell she has been crying, even if her tears are now gone.
A soft breeze is cooling down the hot afternoon. As for the last three
years, he can't take his eyes off her.
"- I love you, he tells her, smiling almost timidly.
- Kiss me, then, she replies."
So does he, putting an end to their story.
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Comments and faves
gill.shail added this photo to his favorites. (63 months ago)
Cat_tac (63 months ago | reply)
** This was voted a hit from Hit, Miss or Maybe **
bleggg (63 months ago | reply)
** This was voted a hit from Hit, Miss or Maybe **
except for the story
Terrible76 (63 months ago | reply)
Score 7/10 (from the Score Me! group)
Mrigasheersha (63 months ago | reply)
The pose is kinda stiff.maybe a head shot alone would have been better??
Score 6/10 (from the Score Me! group)
tom-bradley (63 months ago | reply)
Score 7/10 (from the Score Me! group)
is it candid? im assuming the story is humourous as that is one big pile of cheese! haha
DimitriS Photography (63 months ago | reply)
Score 8/10 (from the Score Me! group)
|| Ramit Batra || (63 months ago | reply)
i wish there was a 'Super' to add before the hit...
till then...
"This was voted a HIT from Hit, Miss or Maybe"
jimmyolive added this photo to their favorites. (63 months ago)
jimmyolive (63 months ago | reply)
Score 6/10 (from the Score Me! group)
Ko_An (62 months ago | reply)
it's funny when you know that a kiss is your last kiss, even though nothing would say so
Romina O. added this photo to her favorites. (62 months ago)
°]° (62 months ago | reply)
Thanks all for rating, scoring, and hitting.
@_KoAn_ : somehow, "funny" wasn't the term that first came to my mind about such a situation... gotta try it again and see.
Ko_An (62 months ago | reply)
ok, let's say "weird", more than funny. i apologize for my bad english
°]° (62 months ago | reply)
Weird it is then.
Definitely.
And that said, I won't have to try it again... which is kind of a relief, gotta say.
(But funny worked too... in a weird way... hehe)
Ko_An (62 months ago | reply)
well, i must admit that last time this occurred to me it was middle way between fun and desperation. while we were kissing i felt it would have been last one, even though there were no good byes or fights or anything else, and I felt quite nuts for this feeling, so that's why "funny"
TeraRoop11, La mia voglia indomita di Vivere., _pris_, lightblueflower, and 7 other people added this photo to their favorites.
British Pixie (33 months ago | reply)
What is better than a love story? The point is not the 'pose' but
the feelings express through the unspoken. A simple kiss, yet the
message is well received for those who understand such things.
Look beyond what your eyes show you and view from within.
Just saying loves.
~Cheers!
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