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melò... :-) N° 4 is full of passion, indeed :-)
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Very Clever.... Well Done!
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Excellent!
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Nicely done.
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Brilliant! Especially the saw dust blood.
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Everyone knows that suicide is sexy. So hot, J.
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Wild stuff. Your craft of storytelling is superb here.
It is an odd story however of making out right after suicide, though....
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Clever idea of using drawing dummies for characters.
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Not only is the story great, but the photos themselves are as well.
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clever !
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Hey all. Thanks for the compliments on my story! Pterandon, I was going more for the angle of--not to sound hokey here, but--love calling someone back from the darkness, rather than making out, but it's all open to interpretation. ;)
Anyway, thanks again everyone. --J
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May I bump a nice story!
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Thats a great story, it flows really well and has an overall great feelign to it.
As said above, the sawdust blood really adds to the feel of this story, its finer detail really adds to the atmosphere.
Good job on Bumping this MR PeterKvG, a story that deservs to be seen for sure :D
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Wonderfull idea! Bet they call their first son Pinocchio and live happily ever after.
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arbeer.de edited this topic 76 months ago.
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i agree with the others - a clever way to tell this story with nice details, like the blood and the bandage. i´m glad that the story has a happy ending!
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Congrats for such a nice story!
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great story love frame 4 the lighting is superb.
its so cool you use some sort of wood/ or maybe grated cheese :) to represent him bleeding shows you are thinking in terms of your character.
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Thanks for the compliments, all :)
The "blood" is--as a few have guessed--sawdust. The figures are made of wood, so I figured their insides were too. Using the same material they're constructed from, but in different form, would be the best way to portray what the figure had done.
Funny thing about that sawdust--I had none at home so I swiped it off the floor of the lumber section at Lowe's :)
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i love it!
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awesome
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waving my penis at traffic [deleted] says:
Reading it the other way around works as well..
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Lol, it's a little more depressing that way ;)
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