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First attemp can I get some feedback
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The exposure isn't bad. I would selectively burn some of the bricks and high-pass sharpen to make them pop a bit, and not be so distracting.
The skin looks a bit overly smoothed... especially the guy's face. A guy's face should never be that smooth!
Posted 6 months ago.
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his face looks ashy and grey--you went a bit overboard with the retouching, esp on the side [it's naturally darker than the center]
the girl is a bit smooth too, there seems to be some colour banding on her hair and she looks ashy on her shoulders and orangeish in the face.
not a bad first attempt, hopefully you'll learn from your mistakes!
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